In Part 1 of this series, we discovered that explaining the value your
products offer is only one part of the copywriting process. Creating a
visual image is another. While Wholesalers USA knew their target customers
better than most companies do, they needed help with two areas: optimizing
their copy for the search engines and incorporating visual imagery.
Since Wholesalers USA had extensive information about its customers,
assessing the target audience was a quick process. We were able to move
quickly to step two: the selection of keyphrases. Again, Wholesalers USA
had done their homework.
Checking a variety of sources, they developed a selection of keyphrases they
thought would work well for their home page. In addition, they reviewed
their on-site searches for additional terms users frequently queried.
As I began to write, I kept these terms in mind and created ways to use them
so they would flow naturally within the text. I also made a point to
incorporate the “creative terms” mentioned in Part 1 and improve the feeling
of trust for the visitor.
Keeping quality as a primary focus, I rephrased and repositioned the
headline previously located in the center of the top banner area. Rather
“Bringing You Quality at Wholesale Prices - Always the Most Value for Your
“Always the Highest Quality at the Lowest Prices”
This was inserted as a bold headline before the opening paragraph. The
reworked headline flowed better and gave a more direct message. The
following replaced the headline in the center banner area:
“Gorgeous Glass Mosaic Tiles and Glass Gems Direct from the Wholesaler”
Keyphrases found here helped contribute to the overall optimization of the
The copy began with a play on an old saying. It delivered a brief
explanation of why the company’s tiles and gems were so inexpensive and how
quality was retained, then worked its way to a mention of a popular
television show to boost trust and credibility. Although they had the
privilege of providing tiles, stones and more for an episode of Extreme
Makeover: Home Edition, Wholesalers USA mentioned this only on internal
pages. Adding this to the home page copy (and providing a link for the
details) allowed visitors to immediately see how different Wholesalers USA
was from other companies.
To extend the copy and provide additional opportunities to entice visitors,
very brief descriptions of each category represented on the home page were
written. This also allowed the search engines to better assess the subject
and relevance of the page. (Currently the descriptions are listed at the
bottom of the home page until the programmer is able to move them underneath
each graphic.) You can see the current home page copy here (PDF).
Mark from Wholesalers USA explains the results best. “Before the rewrite we
didn’t have any organic traffic for the supplemental keywords. The only
traffic we had with these words were with PPC advertising. For our two main
key phrases. I believe we were around page 5 on Google as of the update this
past January. Previously we were found around page 35 for one phrase and
the other could not be found at all.
“The biggest impact we have noticed is the dramatic increase in organic
traffic (about a 50% increase) and in the number of conversions we are
receiving from the organic phrases targeted in the makeover. A quick look.
this afternoon shows where the phrases ranked in the search engines:
[typically from #1 to #10].
“The rewrite has had a better effect than we expected. Almost immediately
(within a few days) we started seeing traffic based on the new keywords and
since then we see many of these key phrases continuing to move up in
“Although there are still many visitors who don’t purchase on their first
visit, we do see that most of our visitors are adding us to their favorites.
This typically results in a sale at a later time as our log files show a
relatively high conversion rate for these visitors (direct traffic).”
Good deal, Mark! That’s what it’s all about!
Marketing Words, Inc.