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#1 copywriter

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Posted 25 September 2003 - 03:18 PM

Hi All,

I have a client who I've done some work for. He now wants me to rewrite his site as it is not pulling very well for him.

I'm not an "IT chick" so I need to do a little research about this before I jump in. I'm looking for those who work in IT to help.

What I need is your opinion about the current copy on my client's home page. I have a few ideas about what's wrong with it, but it would be wonderful to get some first-hand insight.

Have 5 minutes? PM me and I'll send you the URL.

Thanks!!
Karon

#2 Ron Carnell

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Posted 25 September 2003 - 05:55 PM

I'll be happy to look at it if you'd like, Karon ...

#3 copywriter

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Posted 25 September 2003 - 07:59 PM

Thanks everyone! I appreciate all the immediate and detailed feedback. What I suspected is true and I now have a line of defense planned.

#4 air-dog

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Posted 26 September 2003 - 08:32 PM

Hi Karon,

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner on this one, I've read it and had a few thoughts, Nothing mayor, so I'll put something together over the weekend.




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